I think in our mad rush to create wonderful
and lovable protagonists, we are forgetting a very important character in our
manuscripts. The Antagonist. Who single handedly drives the conflict. Who
creates tension. Who is responsible for creating obstacles in our character’s life; of plunging their lives in darkness, for
dumping problems and anxieties in their lives.
The protagonist and antagonist are two sides
of the same coin. Without them our manuscript is incomplete. Having a strong
antagonist is as important as having a strong
protagonist. While working on my current WIP, I realized that I had paid
a lot of attention to my protagonist, but, where my antagonist was concerned, I
had a weak one. It was no wonder then, that the
conflict in my manuscript was tilted in the protagonist’s favor. Alas, that
would not make for a good and intriguing book.
To have a tough conflict the antagonist has to be
as strong as the protagonist. If
the protagonist is powerful, then the antagonist has to be equally powerful. If
the protagonist is clever and resourceful, then the antagonist has to be
equally clever and resourceful. If the balance tilts in one person’s favour,
the conflict loses its appeal. But if we have two powerful forces, that’s when
the conflict becomes interesting and the battle
between them engrossing and intriguing. Till the last minute the reader
must keep guessing who is going to win the war.
We have to
constantly ask ourselves what are our
antagonist’s strengths? What are the advantages he has that give him an edge over our main character. Is he able to
capitalize on his strengths and
advantages to thwart their attempts? Is
he able to push them into corners? What
about his weaknesses? Is the main character aware of the chinks in his armour? What is the
antagonist’s safeguard against the protagonist?
To have a strong conflict, I have to give both the protagonist and the antagonist an equal number of strengths and weaknesses. A battle grips us
when there are two powerful forces; forces pitted against each other, forces
who would go to any length to win. Who
is about to find the chink in the other’s armour first? Who is able to capitalize on the other
person’s weakness first will decide the winner?
In a
nutshell to create an edge of the seat conflict and a memorable antagonist we
need:
1. A
lovable protagonist opposite a dislikeable antagonist.
2. A
strong and clever protagonist against an
equally strong and clever antagonist.
3. The
strengths of the protagonist equal the strengths of the antagonist.
4. The
weaknesses of the antagonist is on par with the weaknesses of the protagonist.
5. Who
is able to find the other’s weakness first? This will decide the outcome of the
conflict.
I loved Harry Potter as much as I disliked
Voldemort. I wanted Harry to kill Voldemort come what may. Both were equally powerful
forces and their clashes were page turners. They were two formidable forces
with an equal number of strengths and weaknesses.
Is
the antagonist on top of your character development? Do you believe that powerful antagonists drive the conflict
better? What are the things you all are doing to create powerful antagonists? We all would
love to know.
What a wonderful post! It's also very helpful. Will bookmark it as a favourite.
ReplyDeleteRight! The antagonist has to be rich and well rounded too, otherwise he/she/it ends up being flat and caricature-ish.
ReplyDeleteGreat post, as always Rachna!
Great post, Rachna! So often it's tempting to simply make the antagonist a foil for the protagonist's virtues and they both fall flat.
ReplyDeleteAck what a creepy picture! =) He still weirds me out!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to mold my antagonist with love in my next WIP. So much so he might actually become lovable. ;)
Yes! You're exactly right when you say that the antagonist has to be the equal of the protagonist or the story is not balanced.
ReplyDeleteJai
This is good info! I have much to learn in this area; thanks for the input:)
ReplyDeleteAnonymous, thanks!
ReplyDeleteLydia, a rich and well rounded antagonist makes perfect sense. Anything else looks caricaturish, weak and uninteresting.
Elizabeth, many times I have noticed that the antagonist is just a foil for the protagonist's virtues, that's when I lose interest in the book.
Anne, I am moulding my antagonist with so much love that now it has started freaking me out. I want my readers to hate him, not fall in love with him.
Jai...two powerful opponents who clash often make for a good story.
Karen, we all are still learning. Everytime I work on my WIP, I learn something new.
Ooh great post and so true :)
ReplyDeleteI love creating both characters. Yes, even memoir has 'characters'
And thank you for your lovely comment on my blog post today. It was very encouraging :)
Interesting post.
ReplyDeleteI think it depends on the book. In Kristin Cashore's best-selling GRACELING, the first antagonist was left behind at the end of Part One, and the second antagonist lurked in the background (and sent out minions) while the protagonist struggled to reach him in Part Two.
A great example of an antagonist starting out boorish and becoming sympathetic can be found in Clare B. Dunkle's THE HOLLOOW KINGDOM.
Excellent post as I am now just developing my antagonist in this present book and as you said, I need him to be as strong as my MC. I am weak in this area and so your points were very useful to me!
ReplyDeleteLoved this post, Rachna. Your passion shines through yet again. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Rachna. Your point about having a lovable protag pitted against an ugly antagonist is well-taken. This past year, I read three books that did not appeal to me for the very reason that the PROTAGONIST was very unlikable - perhaps better suited as the 'villains.' I think you can have dark, edgy MCs, but they have to have a redeemable quality/trait that allows the reader to relate. Same as with your villain. He can't be ALL bad... he, too, needs those redeeming qualities you mention.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sending this link! I love your points about the antagonist, and it's another reminder that I have lots of work to do on mine. This was wonderful, thank you.
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