Humor I feel is one of the most important elements in our stories and
also the hardest to get it right. As writers we do not have a visual medium to
portray humor. But we have words at our disposal. With words we can create
humorous situations. There are several ways to add humor into our stories. Here are few of them.
1. The names of characters/places and objects can
be funny.
2. We can
also give characters some quirks: a twitch, a distinctive style of
talking
or a weird way of dressing.
3. One
of the best way of adding humor can
be through Descriptions.
Funny descriptions
make the readers laugh. Eg “she had
spread like
melted butter.” “A bee could get lost in the hair on
his body.”
4. As writers we can use words to conjure up Situations which can be
comical by creating a Comedy
of Errors.
5. Dialogues can be infused with mega doses of humor to bring on the
laughter. Dialogues are the best places to add
humor. I am working on
this aspect.
6. The way
a character thinks (the internal conversation ) can be humorous.
This
can be one of the easiest way to bring the element of humor into our
stories.
7. We have to find new and funny
way to say the same often repeated old
thing.
8. A fantastic way to add humor
is via Satire and Irony. Irony is the use of
words
to express the opposite of their literal meaning. Satire is the use of
irony
or wit to attack something. But its also extremely difficult because
if not
handled well it can leave the reader
confused. I seldom use satire
and
irony as I am not very confident I can do them justice.
9. We can
use funny metaphors and similes that can
give a comical twist
to a
familiar image in a reader's mind. “
He was as thin as a breadstick.”
“Her skin was as soft as a caramel custard, “His chin wobbled like jelly.”
10. One of the best advice for adding humor is to stir the senses. Sensory
Humor is giving funny descriptions when
describing something with
the five senses: especially while describing
sounds, tastes and smells.
Whether
we writers are personally funny or serious is not important. What is
important is whether we can make readers
think that our characters, dialogues and situations are funny. Whether
we can make our readers laugh.
How do you all add humor in your stories? Is there any
humor secret/wisdom you would like to share? Please tell us, we all can learn
from it.
I don't know exactly how I do it, but I like to add touches of humor into my stories as well, even if the overall tone of the story is serious. It's such a nice break for the reader, so long as it's not too out there!
ReplyDelete“Humor is the great thing, the saving thing. The minute it crops up, all our irritation and resentments slip away, and a sunny spirit takes their place.” Mark Twain
ReplyDeleteI don't think about injecting humor. It just happens.
Other quotes: “Chaos in the midst of chaos isn't funny, but chaos in the midst of order is.” Steve Martin
"Humor is something that thrives between man’s aspirations and his limitations. There is more logic in humor than in anything else. Because, you see, humor is truth.” Victor Borge
Nice post, Rachna. Thank you for the happy anniversary wish.
What a timely post, Rachna! I've been thinking about humor lately, and wondering what makes for humor in a story. I haven't really come up with an answer, although I know "funny" when I read it. So your post helps clarify a lot. I'm still working on humor myself, and this gives me a lot to think about.
ReplyDeleteMy crit partner has noted several times that my comic relief has helped her get through some of my tougher scenes. I'm a big believer in humor.
ReplyDeleteWonderful advice! I love humor in writing; it helps make things so much more interesting. Have a wonderful weekend!
ReplyDeleteI keep trying at humor and usually end up with sarcasm. Maybe I need a trickster character to help lighten the load because my MC just can't seem to go there!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, Rachna. Humour is one of the hardest things to write because there are so many ways it can go wrong and not many ways it can go write. For me, the main thing is that it comes through easily and in an unstilted manner.
ReplyDeleteI try to let the funny moments come out naturally through my characters because that way I know I'm not forcing it.
Jai
These are all great suggestions. But I'd caution not to use too much humor--especially if you're writing for adults. The Industry says "comedies don't sell." I have no idea if that's true (I rather suspect that a lot of their "rules" are based on bad information) but if you want to sell, you have to make sure your book is a thriller/romance/mystery whatever first with comic elements secondary--so nobody can call it a comedy in a meeting.
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ReplyDeleteHumour is a difficult thing to write well. My only advice is not to laugh at our own jokes ;)
ReplyDeleteGreat question! I am not someone this comes easily for, so I appreciate the list. :) I had one character mostly providing the humor in my last novel and in one life-threatening scene, he "inspires" his men to keep trying by telling them a story. The story itself isn't funny, though some of his are. This particular scene had humor because of how inappropriate the story itself is. Juxtaposition of intent and situation, I guess. Boy, if you have to explain a joke, it just ain't funny! LOL
ReplyDeleteI've never been good with humor, so I rarely include that element in my writing, at least consciously. Sometimes though, I can write something accidentally, but incredibly, hilarious.
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I like reading serious stories with touches of humor. Your tips are great, and I'm posting it to Twitter. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLove all of your ideas, Rachna!! Great list!
ReplyDeleteI agree that humor is ultimately important - especially in heavy, dark, emotional books where readers need to come up for air. I was just looking at one of my favorite books today, The Miracle Life of Edgar Mint, which really is a sad, sad tale. But the author, Brady Udall, has the 'voice' of the young boy down perfectly - showing us sarcasm and hilarious thoughts through the MC's young eyes. One laugh-out-loud passage was about a bus driver picking up a heavy storage trunk:
ReplyDeleteHe positioned himself in front of the trunk like an Olympic weight lifter and grasped the handles on either side. He strained to heft it off the ground and let loose a thunderous, rippling fart which made the woman next to me flinch and backpedal as if one of the bus tires had blown.
Thanks for the great ideas. I agree that it's not always easy to pull off authentic humor. But you've given us a place to start!
Good post Rachna-- I am trying to do that now with my current WIP--not easy, is it?
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