Today’s post is
a part of the Lucky 7 Meme tag. I was tagged by Alexia. I thought it would be
fun to play along.
Here are the rules.
1.
Go to page 77 of your current MS, WIP.
2.
Go to line 7.
3.
Copy down the next 7 lines, sentences or paragraphs and
post them as they are written.
4. Tag 7 authors.
5. Let them know.
4. Tag 7 authors.
5. Let them know.
Here is my snippet from my MG
paranormal fiction ‘The Soreiquil’. It’s the first draft, so please overlook
the grammar and everything else.
The Cockroach Invasion Episode had unnerved Rahul. He had promised himself that he would control his temper. Magic escaping from his body was creating havoc. Four days later, during art class, Rahul’s pencil tip broke. He lifted the gold pencil lying in his pencil box. The Art teacher, Miss Lila, was nicknamed The Barbie Doll by students. She had graduated out ofArt College few months back. Dressed in a long black skirt and a loose dark blue blouse, her high heels
adding inches to her tall frame, Miss Lila moved between rows distributing the
previous session’s drawings.
The Cockroach Invasion Episode had unnerved Rahul. He had promised himself that he would control his temper. Magic escaping from his body was creating havoc. Four days later, during art class, Rahul’s pencil tip broke. He lifted the gold pencil lying in his pencil box. The Art teacher, Miss Lila, was nicknamed The Barbie Doll by students. She had graduated out of
Rahul stared at Ziko. The
ghost’s body was barely visible in the harsh sunlight streaming through the window.
“It’s okay. You can use the pencil,” Ziko smiled.
Pencil shavings dropped into
Rahul’s lap as he rolled the pencil’s head inside the sharpener. Sweeping the
shavings off his lap, he tested the tip. It was sharp and firm. Through the
telepathic link connecting them, Ziko heard Rahul mutter the Devito spell.
“Oh shucks…” Ziko frowned. The Devito
spell was the wrong one. It would further ruin Rahul’s pathetic drawing
skills.
Catching a glimpse of Rahul’s
sketch, Ziko grimaced. Rahul had not inherited his mother’s artistic talent.
The elf on the board had
a pointed face, Rahul’s elf had a face as round as an orange. Miss Lila’s elf- figure
had large and pointed ears, Rahul’s elf had tiny, square shaped ears. The Devito spell had made a mockery of
Rahul’s drawing.
Hope you enjoyed it. I am
tagging
I hope the 7 Authors will share snippets from their manuscripts. Have a lovely weekend friends
and do let me know what you think of my snippet.
Interesting and different , Rachna:)
ReplyDeleteFascinating excerpt, Rachna! I've seen this meme all over this week. It's a fun one!
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend!
I enjoyed the snipet from your WIP.
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt! I didn't realize we could use 7 paragraphs. I thought it was only lines. As it was, my 7 lines = 7 paragraphs. Obviously I didn't read the instructions very well.
ReplyDeleteThis meme sure when viral. :D
Dang I've been tagged! Fortunately, I'm only on page six of my current manuscript. Ha!
ReplyDeleteHahaha you're actually the second person that tagged me. ^_^
ReplyDeleteI'll put up my response either tomorrow or on Monday.
Thanks for the tag Rachna:)
ReplyDeleteI did enjoy this, yes. I found it quite delightful.
ReplyDeleteNice excerpt! I enjoyed reading. Dang, that meme sure went viral. It is all over the interwebz. :-)
ReplyDeleteThis is a great snippet, Rachna! I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteHi friends...by the time I finish the final draft, I hope this scene survives. I am noticing that plenty of my favourite scenes do no make it to the final version :(
ReplyDeletenice meme. if you have one for bloggers then tag me:)
ReplyDeleteCan't eait to read more Rachna
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